tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8458581324926992168.post3447428524931774561..comments2023-11-05T01:09:57.170-07:00Comments on Mark Noce Stories: Haiku and HiatusMarkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01793077012143289985noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8458581324926992168.post-73120973661909988662010-09-05T00:24:22.305-07:002010-09-05T00:24:22.305-07:00thanks for visiting my blog
these 2 haikus are ver...thanks for visiting my blog<br />these 2 haikus are very soothingEeleen Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15221723342556515161noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8458581324926992168.post-61767907845078155332010-09-04T14:02:57.361-07:002010-09-04T14:02:57.361-07:00Those Haiku are inspired! Absolutely wonderful! Ho...Those Haiku are inspired! Absolutely wonderful! Hope your break is a good one and you achieve what you're aiming at!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11046724975658216337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8458581324926992168.post-50395644953597466882010-09-04T12:23:27.688-07:002010-09-04T12:23:27.688-07:00Beautiful! Good luck. Hope everything goes well on...Beautiful! Good luck. Hope everything goes well on your hunt for an agent.RaShelle Workmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17582252557500502186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8458581324926992168.post-53290169374158600592010-09-03T20:56:14.771-07:002010-09-03T20:56:14.771-07:00The "wine stains upon bone moon" is real...The "wine stains upon bone moon" is really exquisite- I love these!<br /><br />Enjoy your break!Stephanie Thorntonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17437077559099315853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8458581324926992168.post-25478201138279086302010-09-03T17:24:54.012-07:002010-09-03T17:24:54.012-07:00Wow!!! Thanks for all the terrific feedback everyo...Wow!!! Thanks for all the terrific feedback everyone:) I've been enjoying your poetry as well:)Markhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01793077012143289985noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8458581324926992168.post-11901549981222283532010-09-03T13:41:46.632-07:002010-09-03T13:41:46.632-07:00First one is my fave and followed the 5-7-5 rules....First one is my fave and followed the 5-7-5 rules. Very beautiful.Wendy Tyler Ryanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10841984342368861282noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8458581324926992168.post-56571765711043014492010-09-03T12:29:00.443-07:002010-09-03T12:29:00.443-07:00These are lovely, so very vivid and expressive! Th...These are lovely, so very vivid and expressive! The imagery in the first one is magnificent :)Viridian Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10041466964085728629noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8458581324926992168.post-10356098569152652932010-09-03T12:07:36.185-07:002010-09-03T12:07:36.185-07:00Ooh, I like these. "Champagne tree tops"...Ooh, I like these. "Champagne tree tops" was my favorite part.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8458581324926992168.post-32372671526660644642010-09-03T11:36:19.812-07:002010-09-03T11:36:19.812-07:00Very nice - you paint a vivid picture with your wo...Very nice - you paint a vivid picture with your words - lovely :)Jemi Fraserhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02214408467456320167noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8458581324926992168.post-64500725480831004862010-09-03T11:33:49.213-07:002010-09-03T11:33:49.213-07:00Nice haiku! ;-)
all my very best
Alan
2010 With ...Nice haiku! ;-)<br /><br />all my very best<br /><br />Alan<br /><b><i>2010 With Words Haiku Competition:</i></b> <a href="http://www.withwords.org.uk/comp.html" rel="nofollow">weblink</a>Area 17https://www.blogger.com/profile/07472190637554124160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8458581324926992168.post-39872332496433862952010-09-03T10:30:57.687-07:002010-09-03T10:30:57.687-07:00I love the description of the moon in the first on...I love the description of the moon in the first one--oh, lovely. Just lovely.Just Another Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07589166715361819941noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8458581324926992168.post-43707879233155822872010-09-03T09:36:23.639-07:002010-09-03T09:36:23.639-07:00More autumnal haiku - that seems to be a common th...More autumnal haiku - that seems to be a common theme today. These are fantastic, especially the first.Franklin Beaumonthttp://www.flashfictiondaily.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8458581324926992168.post-47863633386712001752010-09-03T08:21:56.542-07:002010-09-03T08:21:56.542-07:00Tricia is right, these are stunning. I'm awed....Tricia is right, these are stunning. I'm awed. Beautiful work.VR Barkowskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04927993233682731113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8458581324926992168.post-1179122527581164392010-09-03T08:02:31.883-07:002010-09-03T08:02:31.883-07:00You draw powerful word pictures. 'wine stains ...You draw powerful word pictures. 'wine stains upon a bone moon' is so vivid. Thanks for posting these.Tricia J. O'Brienhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05993110400088806252noreply@blogger.com